I'm joining a poetry community that looks like it's going to be a lot of fun. Every week there will be a prompt to write a different type of poem. The winner even gets a prize!

They need some more folks to join before they can get started though. Please consider joining.

Do You Like To Write? Like to write? Love writing poetry? Great! There is a new challenge, called lastpoetstandng, where you write a a poem every week based on a different style of poetry prompt! Then they get voted on and the person with the least votes is out that week and the person with the most is safe the next week till you have one author standing who wins! What do you win? A snazzy graphic and a $10 GC to Amazon or Barnes & Noble. You don't even need to be a GREAT writer! ..who will come out on top?

When I walk into the building, I look all around me, and I see it, I see everything fly by me so clearly. I see everything around me so clearly, see those that I love that are so dear to me, and as I walk down the hallway nothing but happiness surrounds me a pain that someday will astound me. I walk past you and I think damn if only you knew, if only they all knew, the ones that I love, will they ever, could they ever.... And then I look up at the sky and thank God that today's luck hasn't turned with the tides. I walk past those that I love, laugh as I'm going as I'm strolling along, I hug those that mean everything to me, I try to recall everything that I was meant to say. Could you ever see? Could you ever see that when I look at you I see the longing deep within? I see the longing and yet you will never give it a chance, for how could you? So stuck within your own self but could you ever love me?.... Its like the rythm of the clock, pounding here, tinging there, and clicking its way along as I sit and wait, as I ponder, oh how I ponder. But I know that someday I will come back and show you all that I was meant for, show you all the love that this heart could possibly muster. I feel the pounding like the swishing back and forth, back and forth and I think can you feel it? Can you feel it?!!! Can you feel the calling like that of nature's birds calling back and forth, like the roar of a lion to warn a herd? Like the chasing of monkies going in for the kill. And now its me, now it's I, I just can't, just can't cause if I ever lost you surely everything of mine would have had enough. And now I'm sitting here, trying to recall all of those things that I was supposed to say, trying to recall all of the things that I did say. But was it ever enough? Now im here, falling into the arms of someone new, now im here crying to the sound of a new tune. Now I have my strong man here saying that he'll never get fed up, of everything I am in the shadows of the night, of the deep abyss that calls me again and again with the sound of the rain hitting my window pane. Oh no I'll never get enough. And the days, I know that the days are limited, know that its now or never know that one hundred years are my limit and such. But someday after all is said and through I'll come back and as you open that door I'll ask "Can you see me now, have I finally become that somebody?" Can you see me? Can you see me now? But I'll never lose sleep for surely that day will come, believe me that day will surely come.

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i don't want to hear the junk you say
people struggle, so who's to say
we have an opinion on them
even if they put themselves in that place
dumb young money drunk druggie
all the lures fed to trap them
we should help free them
back to our side
(c)-03/10/2010 j.smith, all rights reserved
printing prohibited without permission

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plugging along with the trials
still before me
did i add another burden?
or is this a helping oar
to paddle along, close to the shore.
(c)-06/21/2010 j.smith, all rights reserved
printing prohibited without permission

Critique **not** requested

http://spiritualjuice.blogspot.com/ <-- poetry blog
http://janice-mariesmith.blogspot.com/ <-- novella blog

Five minutes before midnight
Under full moon, I come just in time
I felt like Cinderella, missing a shoe
Just in time, i was guided to you
In time to see your magnetic eyes
Proof that the universe doesn't lie
Merging us together, the definition of fate
Let me in as your only mate
The windows of your soul always give me a sign
That strikes me all over, from my head to my spine
I wish I could live inside your eyes
As I wish you'd wish to live in mine
Proof that love exists, a confirmation of hope
No need to feel guarded, attached to a rope
Whenever I see you, there's peers all around
Let's go to place where we'll never be found
Clones of pretty girls and posers who mooch
Our love for eachother is the only truth
Forget the others, only i can truly shine
It's all an illusion until our hearts combine
Together in eternity, all our past lives
You're my warrior, a hero from medieval times
My heart's on fire, only you can ease the flame
Stubborn barriers are the only to blame
Our special moments are so brutally brief
A loss of closer as it's time for all to leave
Leaving me with feelings no one can believe
Moments more memorable than a wild sky dive
An adrenalin rush that defeats all fears and lies
The wall between us is heaven's gate
Hold me in your arms to erase every hate
Lets merge together, a life of pleasure
Written in the stars, and no one will ever
Love you like i do, a love that's forever
Soon we will see, this beautiful reality
So simple, one on one, just you and me
Lets escape this room of false people
Lets for once be alone, erasing all evil
We'll look into our eyes, for once no distractions
Melting together, rapture concluding all of our actions
We'll indulge in our love that's been lovingly blessed
By guided angels who've realized our love is the best
The angels of heaven have fulfilled their task
Uniting our pure souls together, forever to last
Lets run away from this unreliable world
Away from the users and whorish girls
Who contaminate your gentle soul
A soul so genuine, wasted by fools
I'll destroy the false ego you think you possess
You're back down to earth as it's time to confess
That you are my soulmate, it's simple as that
No other way to put it, and that is a fact
We'll get lost in eachother as we begin to kiss
Transported to an island of pure electric bliss
In my dreams I bring you into my room
We confess our passion, another blue moon
A candlelight cuddle, an eternal pleasure
As we physically express our love together
A pleasure undefinable, a special act of love
A proof that miracles can come from above
Our souls have the power to heal
Every evil we've suffered, for our love is real
I'll evaporate any scars of your pain
And replenish it with love, your shelter from rain
Through all of our sorrow, leading us to now
Meant to be, so lucky, no need to say how
No more distractions, as no one is occupied
Trusting our love throughout all our past lives
I need you're soul as you need me
Power to turn salvation into reality
We can't stop now, until we have it all
You're the only one to catch my fall
Lets enjoy life's lottery of finding our half
Our awareness and joy to forever last
Pat yourself on the back, I'm all you need
Close your beautiful eyes, and dream about me
We've finally made it, no need to be afraid
You can trust me to cure you and set you free
Don't be afraid, just let yourself in
I'll hold you tight with a love beyond genuine
Stay with me, you'll forever be safe
From any trouble and sadness you fear to face
I call you my miracle yet it's only begun
This journey and completion of eternal love
Now lay asleep my dearest treasure
As you feel our energy melting together
You're who i love, on the top of my list
You're the key to my lock, you're my cosmic gift.

[Wild 067] Bart Hard, La Foudre, Mental D-struction - Live @ Thematics 19.12.09
Speedcore, Experimental, Noisecore, Flashcore





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Tracklist :

01. Bart Hart - Live @ Thematics 35'
02. La Foudre - Live @ Thematics 38'
03. Mental D-struction - Live @ Thematics 39'




POWERED by Thematics (2rrr Radio)
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alternativ cover by Compulsiv


-->MENTAL D-STRUCTION
http://www.myspace.com/mmentaldestruction


-->LA FOUDRE
http://www.lechaosordinaire.com
http://www.lechaosordinaire.com/index.php?page=video
No-Tek : http://www.no-tek.net/no-tek-or-not


-->BART HARD
http://www.myspace.com/barthard


DISCOGS : http://www.discogs.com/Bart-Hard-La-Foudre-Mental-D-struction-Live-Thematics-191209/release/2065493

you are my life

i am so in love with you
after all these years
i yearn to be close to you
hug you, touch you
spend my entire life with you
forever and a day
my heart burns for you

i'm happy.

(c) 07-25-09-j. smith, all rights reserved.
printing prohibited without permission



Critique NOT requested.